New song I've been working on, check it out and let me know what you think, any and all criticisms appreciated. Still working on the melody.
Chelsea’s Eyes
© Josh Doughtie
Verse 1:
There she was listening to No Doubt
With her blonde hair let down,
Humming her favorite song
Every moment elapsed
Creating memories to last
Like a glimpse of the stars at dawn
Refrain:
I don’t know what it is
But it’s a feeling I can’t resist
Chorus:
Must be Chelsea's eyes
And there’s sweetness in her laughter
Her smile's bright
And it’s a moment worth to capture
It just feels so right
These feelings getting stronger
It’s her and only her on my mind
Verse 2:
When she does that high heel walk,
After a long day of class and work,
She tries to catch the bus on time,
Sometimes I’m the lucky one,
The bus is late, so we wait in the setting sun,
And we talk till it’s time for goodbye,
Refrain:
And for a moment that night,
It’s then and there she shines,
Chorus:
Must be Chelsea's eyes
And there’s sweetness in her laughter
Her smile's bright
And it’s a moment worth to capture
It just feels so right
These feelings getting stronger
It’s her and only her on my mind
Bridge:
Like mesmerizing imagery,
She’ll have you lost in a gaze,
But it would be misery
If I went a week without seeing her face,
Chorus:
Must be Chelsea's eyes
And there’s sweetness in her laughter
Her smile's bright
And it’s a moment worth to capture
It just feels so right
These feelings getting stronger
It’s her and only her on my mind
Yeah it’s her and only her on my mind
Chelsea’s Eyes
© Josh Doughtie
Verse 1:
There she was listening to No Doubt
With her blonde hair let down,
Humming her favorite song
Every moment elapsed
Creating memories to last
Like a glimpse of the stars at dawn
Refrain:
I don’t know what it is
But it’s a feeling I can’t resist
Chorus:
Must be Chelsea's eyes
And there’s sweetness in her laughter
Her smile's bright
And it’s a moment worth to capture
It just feels so right
These feelings getting stronger
It’s her and only her on my mind
Verse 2:
When she does that high heel walk,
After a long day of class and work,
She tries to catch the bus on time,
Sometimes I’m the lucky one,
The bus is late, so we wait in the setting sun,
And we talk till it’s time for goodbye,
Refrain:
And for a moment that night,
It’s then and there she shines,
Chorus:
Must be Chelsea's eyes
And there’s sweetness in her laughter
Her smile's bright
And it’s a moment worth to capture
It just feels so right
These feelings getting stronger
It’s her and only her on my mind
Bridge:
Like mesmerizing imagery,
She’ll have you lost in a gaze,
But it would be misery
If I went a week without seeing her face,
Chorus:
Must be Chelsea's eyes
And there’s sweetness in her laughter
Her smile's bright
And it’s a moment worth to capture
It just feels so right
These feelings getting stronger
It’s her and only her on my mind
Yeah it’s her and only her on my mind